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Endings and Beginnings

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seprater
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I've been thinking about writing a story for a while. I started to write this one a different way but decided that it was going to be too long, so I scrapped it. This version came a little easier. Hopefully it isn't too awful. :) Grammar and spelling hopefully aren't too bad.

If you are just wanting a quicksand scene it is in the epilogue. :)
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Boglurker
Really damn good. I just got this nostalgia feeling that I was back in time when geocities was still on, I read the stories and always looked at your pics :D